This is the first draft of our magazine cover and we want to make sure it will interest our target audience so we will ask a group of people what they like/dislike and any improvements we could make.
When we received the feedback they said that they liked the bold purple block and text and the top as its eye catching but that the rest isn't very interesting. They said that the 2011 film bonanza is irrelevant and not needed and also that the swirly text is hard to read.
They suggested that we should introduce some more shapes to break up the blocks of text and add colour to make it interesting. They did say that they likes the interview with the main actress and that we could maybe include an article not to do with our trailer. These are all things that we will do and was really helpful feedback as it will ensure we are appealing to our target audience.
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